A Part of the Past

September 30, 2008
i miss her so much,
my fists are so clutched,
it was such a big crush,
now my dreams are just dust,
crushed with love and distrust,
must i keep thinking about her touch?,
i cant hide my pride long enough to see,
that maybe it was me,
maybe the way i acted or being too meen,
ill never find out because shes gone
ill never find out what i did wrong
wont be able to say that i loved you all along

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IrinaVeron said...
Oct. 8, 2008 at 1:24 pm
I like this poem very much; it's very musculine and tense.
MsGreco said...
Oct. 7, 2008 at 2:08 pm
Very moving poem. Keep it up!
Irina V. said...
Oct. 3, 2008 at 4:52 pm
I love this poem, it is very sincere and passionate. I hope SHE knows that someone liked her that much.
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