The Hidden

May 17, 2013
"Can you see the pain in his eyes? Past all his lies, he looks totally fine, yet his soul is as old as time, alone feeling safe sound,the fake smile falls to the ground, and his guard is finally down, wishing to give up this long fight, he keeps trying with all his might,leaning on the guardian angel that walks by his side, he puts his mask back on for his selfish pride, hiding all the pain he carries inside."

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Fallenoutofgrace said...
Jun. 4, 2013 at 6:14 am
This was really good, i like how you put your poem in paragraph form it dosn't happen often and it makes it fun to read and i like your flow to so way to go
frommusicwithlove replied...
Jun. 4, 2013 at 9:12 am
Thank you very much! I've never really thought to much of my writting so I really appreciate it. Any advice is always welcomed or if anything else comes to mind feel free to comment.
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