May 10, 2013
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Young & Carefree
I am.

Perfectly Imperfect
I am.

Wild yet vulnerable
I am.

Flawed yet human
I am.

Because of these,
I am.

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Deej6595 said...
Nov. 16, 2013 at 10:08 pm
I like this a lot. I love the contradicting words in the same sentence and the whole meaning of the poem. Beautifully written.
CriticalMe said...
Jun. 5, 2013 at 9:25 pm
It would be better if you avoided clichés. 
teddyG said...
May 22, 2013 at 8:33 pm
i like it its short but strong and convey your intended message like the way it is structured.
JRaye This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
May 22, 2013 at 11:18 am
Really nice, and so incredably true! I love how it's short and to the point, illistrating the message clearly. Great job! :)
rheame said...
May 22, 2013 at 8:28 am
wow! easy but effective! super duper wow!!
Lost_In_Music said...
May 22, 2013 at 7:39 am
I absolutely love this! It's so simple but has a really strong message. Keep up the good work :)
LostandFound4awhile said...
May 18, 2013 at 10:55 pm
Simple, yet truly deep and mindful. All poetry should be like that.
misunderstood5623 replied...
May 19, 2013 at 1:44 pm
Thank you :)
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