Notice Me

September 11, 2008
“I want you to notice me,”
I whisper in his ear.
But instead of listening
You pretend not to hear.

I know I’m not as pretty
As those girls you see,
But I thought
You would like me for being me.

So for now you’ll stay in my dreams,
And I’d like to stay lovers,
So for now,
I’ll dream of you under my covers.

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abbysmiles. said...
Sept. 13, 2008 at 11:45 pm
this is awesome/
POETgirlFOREVER180 said...
Sept. 13, 2008 at 7:10 pm
I like it, it has a good theme, but you need to keep your line-length the same and your number of syllables even. good start though.
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