My Guy!

April 12, 2013
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I can't stop thinking of you,
My head's exploding!
My heart's beating faster,
kind of feels like floating.
Whenever I look at you,
I feel 1000 times lighter,
Like the moon when it's dark
You make my world brighter!
Your the man of my dreams,
the apple to my eye
and I never, ever want
to tell you goodbye.
Your the one for me, and
I hope I'm the one for you
'Cause if you weren't in my life,
I don't know what I'd do.
Your so important to me,
and I think I know why.
Because you're a sweet, sensitive
Out-of-this-world kind of guy!

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thisEmilyda1 said...
Jul. 8, 2015 at 12:02 am
I really like this. I'm new here and not very good at poetry. But I'm writing a lot more now! I hope to get better, I know it's a skill that comes with practice when my work get accepted I would really appreciate you guys checking it out and giving me advice! Cute poem.
Sparrow01 said...
Jul. 10, 2014 at 8:37 pm
This is adorable and well written :) good job! Mind checking my stuff out?
EmAngster00 This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Jul. 25, 2013 at 8:05 pm
Haha this was sweet! I loved your rhyming ^^
Kenzico This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Jul. 24, 2013 at 6:25 pm
Its cute, not my style but its well thought out.
Dancer26 said...
May 3, 2013 at 8:27 am
This is really good, I enjoyed it a truly. Could you review my work as well?
Bluetooth13 replied...
May 3, 2013 at 3:05 pm
Thanks and will do!
Chuckles1995 said...
Apr. 24, 2013 at 10:16 am
this is an amazing poem. i love it a lot
Bluetooth13 said...
Apr. 19, 2013 at 8:35 pm
Please give me some pointers (:
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