My Guy!

April 12, 2013
By Bluetooth13 SILVER, A Town In, Texas
Bluetooth13 SILVER, A Town In, Texas
8 articles 0 photos 46 comments

Favorite Quote:
To play a wrong note is insignificant, to play without passion is inexcusable.

~ Ludwig van Beethoven


I can't stop thinking of you,
My head's exploding!
My heart's beating faster,
kind of feels like floating.
Whenever I look at you,
I feel 1000 times lighter,
Like the moon when it's dark
You make my world brighter!
Your the man of my dreams,
the apple to my eye
and I never, ever want
to tell you goodbye.
Your the one for me, and
I hope I'm the one for you
'Cause if you weren't in my life,
I don't know what I'd do.
Your so important to me,
and I think I know why.
Because you're a sweet, sensitive
Out-of-this-world kind of guy!


The author's comments:
Writting is my passion! I hope you enjoy.

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on Jul. 8 2015 at 12:02 am
ThisEmilyDa1 SILVER, BF, New Mexico
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Favorite Quote:
only a life lived for others is a life worthwhile
-Albert Instien
the only person you should try to be better than is the person you were yesterday.

I really like this. I'm new here and not very good at poetry. But I'm writing a lot more now! I hope to get better, I know it's a skill that comes with practice when my work get accepted I would really appreciate you guys checking it out and giving me advice! Cute poem.

on Jul. 10 2014 at 8:37 pm
Sparrow01 SILVER, Appalachin, New York
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This is adorable and well written :) good job! Mind checking my stuff out?

on Jul. 25 2013 at 8:05 pm
EmAngster00 SILVER, Calavi, Other
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Favorite Quote:
""You can’t be like me
But be happy that you cant
I see pain but I don’t feel it
I am like the old Tin Man.” - Tin Man, The Avett Brothers

Haha this was sweet! I loved your rhyming ^^

Zolenz DIAMOND said...
on Jul. 24 2013 at 6:25 pm
Zolenz DIAMOND, Musquodoboit Harbour, NS, Other
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Favorite Quote:
The pain that have cost us, the evils which have never happened.
- Thomas Jefferson

Its cute, not my style but its well thought out.

on May. 3 2013 at 3:05 pm
Bluetooth13 SILVER, A Town In, Texas
8 articles 0 photos 46 comments

Favorite Quote:
To play a wrong note is insignificant, to play without passion is inexcusable.

~ Ludwig van Beethoven

Thanks and will do!

on May. 3 2013 at 8:27 am
Dancer26 SILVER, Concord, North Carolina
5 articles 0 photos 8 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Beauty is in the heart of the beholder."
- Al Bernstein

"Beauty itself is but the sensible image of the infinite."
-George Bancroft

This is really good, I enjoyed it a truly. Could you review my work as well?

Chuckles1995 said...
on Apr. 24 2013 at 10:16 am
this is an amazing poem. i love it a lot

on Apr. 19 2013 at 8:35 pm
Bluetooth13 SILVER, A Town In, Texas
8 articles 0 photos 46 comments

Favorite Quote:
To play a wrong note is insignificant, to play without passion is inexcusable.

~ Ludwig van Beethoven

Please give me some pointers (:




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