Rain and Stars

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My head hangs
Down to ground
Drawn to earth
Still stars are masked by rain

Down to ground
The torrents plunge
Still stars are masked by rain
And puddles mirror planets

The torrents plunge
Propelled to ground
And puddles mirror planets
Behind curtain clouds

Propelled to ground
The droplets split
From curtain clouds
That mask the stars

The droplets split
My head hangs
The torrents plunge
Drawn to earth.





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punkiekid2003 said...
Sept. 8, 2008 at 6:13 am
Oh wow.... This is amazing. The unusual repetition adds so much emotion. I love it.
 
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