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I Fell in Blue

A gel pen the color of blue
Its mix of ink and fluid
Stains my arms, smudges words
That I hope someday get heard
To hear my tale of love lost
A writer's most ordinary thought
But conceivable grief feels like it's new
Whenever I catch the sight of you
My silly crush must be a game
Of love that you ignore and play
When you talk to other angels of white
My heart starts to crack like ice
Now I won't have the irises dew
Or see the ocean's deep hue
That's the reflection of your eyes
Imitating those clear blue skies
But maybe I never fell for you
Maybe all I did was fall in blue



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sarah98This teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Jul. 8, 2013 at 11:13 am
somewhat confusing....but i reallyyyyy like this. like, alot. its so descriptive and beautiful and i keep repeating the last two lines in my head over and over.
 
WaffleOcean2934This teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. replied...
Jul. 17, 2013 at 4:31 pm
I see your point.  But thanks for the feedback!  
 
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