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School

December 30, 2012
By Hamzawaseem GOLD, Lahore, Other
Hamzawaseem GOLD, Lahore, Other
15 articles 1 photo 144 comments

Favorite Quote:
"The important thing is not to stop questioning." ~Einstein


When I think of my school,
while sitting on a stool,
I reflect that it wasn't very cool,
Why everyone was fool,
enough to go to school?

But the thought comes to mind,
And untimately I find,
that school is the place, I know,
where one starts to grow,
and one's life-stream starts to flow.

Why am I being so poetic,
with a mind scientific,
in my opinion, very scientific?
How wonderful is brain!
But it too can stain.

The brain can be stained,
if it isn't, to work, trained,
like a machine which belongs,
to someone, who doesn't use it for long.
So the mental disease will prolong.

Therefore, we go to school,
to change our minds from those of fools,
into minds of creative guys,
and gals; this we cannot buy,
even after thousands of try!


The author's comments:
This is my very first poetical composition.

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on Apr. 24 2013 at 2:39 pm
Jade.I.Am ELITE, Fishers, Indiana
214 articles 14 photos 1163 comments

Favorite Quote:
“If you're losing your soul and you know it, then you've still got a soul left to lose”
― Charles Bukowski

Though I liked this better than the other ultra-rhymey poem, I still think u need to vary word choice if u rhyme every line with the same sound....but anyways this one I actually loved the idea, it was very well thought out!

on Apr. 12 2013 at 7:49 am
AbbaDabbaDoo PLATINUM, Mountain Grove, Missouri
43 articles 6 photos 30 comments

Favorite Quote:
Some folks are wise and some are otherwise. I guess we know which one you are.

A very nice and very true poem. You are now in my top ten favorite poets ever!

on Apr. 12 2013 at 4:37 am
Shaas_It_is.. BRONZE, Udupi, Other
2 articles 0 photos 42 comments

Favorite Quote:
Happiness presents itself before man with a crown of sorrow. He who accepts it must accept both.
-Swami Vivekananda

Don't be led by your problems. Be led by your dreams.

Its a nice poem..for your first try and your other compositions show that you've grown.. but again you're a very good writer and i always read your work.. :D  

on Mar. 24 2013 at 3:57 pm
SunnyDreams BRONZE, Niger Falls, Other
1 article 0 photos 274 comments

Favorite Quote:
Can you feel what I have seen, when no one else has lived through what I have?-HalveOfLife

i like this one it show the importance of going to school everyday............

HaiDer said...
on Mar. 21 2013 at 3:58 am
yOu are dOing a fab jOb Hamza .. kEep iT uP we aRe wiTh yEw bOi .. :)))

on Mar. 17 2013 at 2:21 pm
monkeymorgan BRONZE, Middlebury, Indiana
2 articles 0 photos 28 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Fair means that everybody gets what they need and the only way to get what you need is to make that happen yourself." Rick Riordan

good peom a litle hard to fallow but good all the same

on Feb. 18 2013 at 12:29 pm
LittleStormWriterGG SILVER, Malvern, Iowa
8 articles 0 photos 60 comments

Favorite Quote:
Imagination is more important than knowledge. ~ Albert Einstein
Smile, laugh, love. :)

I find that one interesting. One I might read again, and thoroughly figure out the meaning. I love poems like this.. where you dig deeper the more you read it.

on Feb. 17 2013 at 11:06 am
Sparkle1pops PLATINUM, Colorado Springs, Colorado
31 articles 20 photos 343 comments

Favorite Quote:
"No great artist ever sees things as they really are. If he did, he would cease to be an artist."
- Oscar Wilde

Cool! but I must admit I got a little confused in the last stanza.

on Feb. 15 2013 at 4:30 pm
ZohaBahir BRONZE, Karachi, Other
3 articles 0 photos 12 comments

Favorite Quote:
Even blood of blood seem to strike no resemblance until the hands and heart are locked up in stiff chains of adversity.

nice work man!

on Feb. 15 2013 at 12:21 am
fromtheashes GOLD, ~~~~~, Montana
14 articles 6 photos 23 comments

Favorite Quote:
"I took the road less traveled, and that has made all the difference"~Robert Frost

I like it! (: it's really nice..I  love your work

on Feb. 13 2013 at 6:08 am
CookieMonster24 PLATINUM, Delhi, Other
25 articles 2 photos 149 comments
I love your work, I always have. Just keep writing like this. Really good.

on Jan. 30 2013 at 11:57 pm
EnnaGirl SILVER, Sacramento, California
9 articles 2 photos 58 comments

Favorite Quote:
Be the change you want to see in the world
- Ghandi

so true! i love the rhyme!!

Lynn7 SILVER said...
on Jan. 16 2013 at 10:15 am
Lynn7 SILVER, Charlotte, North Carolina
5 articles 0 photos 14 comments

Favorite Quote:
Have confidence in yourself...if you believe they'll believe. -Yuani (me)

Haha I find this one comical about school. I like it its very original

on Jan. 15 2013 at 10:14 am
loveshersheys, Lahore, Other
0 articles 2 photos 30 comments
It's a good poem. I like how you write =)

on Jan. 14 2013 at 2:53 pm
LyricLove SILVER, Webster City, Iowa
6 articles 0 photos 20 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Don't tell me the skies the limit when there are foot prints on the moon."

Nice use of the comparisons and adjectives... This was a very true and reliable poem haha!! Keep It Up :P

on Jan. 13 2013 at 2:51 am
Miss_Brightside GOLD, Defiance, Ohio
16 articles 1 photo 74 comments

Favorite Quote:
It's like she sees the diamond underneath And she's polishin' you 'til you shine. -Brad Paisley. (this goes to my step mom she keeps me going)
If you want a rainbow you gotta put up with the rain.-Albert Einstein

i really like thisXD

on Jan. 12 2013 at 12:14 pm
country-cutey GOLD, St.croix Falls, Wisconsin
10 articles 0 photos 43 comments

Favorite Quote:
Dont say it if you dont mean it because i might actually belive it

its very good i love ur poems alot

on Jan. 12 2013 at 11:59 am
theadventuresofemma GOLD, Ontario, Other
12 articles 2 photos 41 comments

Favorite Quote:
For beautiful eyes, look for the good in others.
For beautiful lips, speak only words of kindness.
And for poise walk with the knowledge that you are never alone.
-Audrey Hepburn

i like the comparisons!

on Jan. 11 2013 at 2:18 pm
MonsterGirl2000 SILVER, Des Moines, New Mexico
9 articles 0 photos 53 comments

Favorite Quote:
When it seems like there’s no one left to run to in this empty world you can come to me I’ll be your shooting star. You can tell me your dreams I can’t promise to make them come true, but I’ll be there to pick up the pieces of your broken heart if your dreams happen to fall through…Unknown

i like it...

on Jan. 10 2013 at 7:46 am
Songs_Along GOLD, Abcd, Other
16 articles 0 photos 66 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Sometimes we are only given a few minutes to be with the one we love and a thousand hours to spend just thinking about them."

it's very light....light topic light words...!...d rhyming cud still have been better! :)


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