Tell me why

Tell me why your late today,
And please don't tell me it's okay,
And if you tell me you went to play,
I won't believe a word you say,

Because you're tardy again this week,
I'll have to assume your not a geek.
I really like you, yes I do,
But i will have to punish you.

So please to tell me why you late today,
And please don't say that it's okay.





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bagley777 said...
Sept. 23, 2012 at 6:04 pm
hmm. "So please to tell me why you late today", that line is awkward.(: Also, I didn't get that it was from a teacher before I read the description. In some parts it kind of sounds to me like it could be from a girlfriend to a boyfriend. But you have a good idea going here! Keep writing!(:
 
OWLSLOVESIX replied...
Sept. 24, 2012 at 3:00 pm
Thanks I will keep your comments in mind when I write. It waws a little hard to make it rhyme but I can see why that line is akward. Thank you for the idea about a poem form a boyfriend to a girlfriend! Thanks so much1 Also I submitted a short story, it is being revied right now but can you read it when it comes out? Thanks! ~Owls :)
 
OWLSLOVESIX replied...
Oct. 9, 2012 at 5:40 pm
It is supposed to be why your late today sorry!
 
Cami98 replied...
Oct. 14, 2012 at 7:43 pm
good!  
 
hehehehe said...
Sept. 23, 2012 at 5:50 pm
This is great!
 
OWLSLOVESIX said...
Sept. 13, 2012 at 4:20 pm
Please comment, rate, and give me suggestions on how to make this a better poem! Thanks!
 
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