Puzzle

August 14, 2012
I love you more than life itself,
so much I can't breathe,
baby,baby help.

I'm screaming for help,
but my voice gets caught.
Caught in the tears I've so desperately fought.

See, I'm crying now because I know.
We're just not good for each other,
And one of us must go.

It's like stepping out into darkness,
this life we built to last forever
now crumbles into pieces.

It it my fault or yours?
or no one's at all?
deafened ears aren't hearing my calls.

I'm pleading for comfort, for forgiveness and faith.
But so many things
have just fallen out of place.

Life was picture perfect.
Clean and neat.
Now it's a puzzle, with one missing piece.





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I_aint_Juliet said...
Aug. 23, 2012 at 11:05 am
Hurt. That is the first word that comes to my mind when I'm reading this. It reminds me of my last relationship with this guy who I thought was absolutely perfect and then when we broke up, i saw the ugliest side of him ever. But i still felt like I had lost something so amazing. Will you check out some of my stuff? 
 
That_Writing_Chick replied...
Aug. 24, 2012 at 11:36 pm
Oh yeah. That was my standpoint for a long time... A lot of people (not just guys) are like that. I'll definitely check you out(:
 
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