Touch

FrenchHippie said...
Dec. 28, 2011 at 2:34 am:

Amazing. It's almost like a haiku in that you used so few words to express something really true and profound. Please check out my work and tell me what you think! Thanks :)

 

artmantist said...
Nov. 19, 2011 at 5:27 pm:

hello, nice poem. Would u guys wanna check out my work. its called the cottage 

thank u

 

td123 said...
Oct. 10, 2011 at 8:24 pm:

This is one of the best poems i have ever read

 

jaylw said...
Aug. 7, 2011 at 6:10 pm:

simple and to the point with much meaning

 

willowwriter said...
Jul. 5, 2011 at 5:53 pm:

For something so short. It has a big message. I like it. Good job.

 

crazychick said...
Jun. 22, 2011 at 5:12 pm:

Wow. so simple yet so... wow

 

GothChik95 said...
May 31, 2011 at 5:33 pm:

very mysterious...i likey...

 

msoccerm345 said...
Mar. 26, 2011 at 12:09 pm:

i love this. its so true and can mean so many different things so a lot of different people can relate to it.  i love it sooo much! 

 

Zeeba13 said...
Feb. 23, 2011 at 1:35 pm:

This has been my absolute favorite so far. Simple but very powerful. I definately relate...

 

GrayPenguin.RR22 said...
Feb. 10, 2011 at 5:40 pm:

This ehz ah great poem! :D i am speechless... eht says alot... :) i adore this thee most by far...!♥

 

AYO_itsdeja said...
Feb. 10, 2011 at 2:47 pm:

OMG, the story of my life ! <3

 

looks like you put a lot of effort into this

 

GrayPenguin.RR22 replied...
Feb. 10, 2011 at 5:38 pm :

Dude, don't hate! xP

 

Zeeba13 replied...
Feb. 23, 2011 at 1:37 pm :

it probably takes effort to get the right words... I agree with the penguin! :)

 

GrayPenguin.RR22 replied...
Mar. 6, 2011 at 5:25 pm :

ha! ha! you see! :P honestly, i like it! :D

 

Killerkate said...
Dec. 31, 2010 at 6:32 pm:

yep deffantly know this feeling

 

Well first of all I like it and think its talking about love. We beg for it; when you get hurt in a relationship we're scared to fall in love again, cuz the pain is too unbearable,and in the end we all beg to be loved.

 

Baller22 said...
Aug. 18, 2010 at 7:04 pm:

check out my poems! please!

 

gymn88 said...
Jun. 9, 2010 at 8:49 pm:

i love your poem it's so true i feel the same way

 

UrAnGelBabY replied...
Aug. 18, 2010 at 4:08 pm :

I really like this poem because i feel the same way =D

 

DiamondFire said...
May 21, 2010 at 1:04 pm:

Wow...so short, and yet so much meaning...beautiful!

 

BiancaMarie said...
Apr. 30, 2010 at 8:21 am:

hmm..never knew a poem this short could be this good. 

checkk out mine??

 

kankan said...
Jan. 10, 2010 at 1:18 pm:

This was very touching and so true

 

THis was short. and at first i was going to go past. i like lengthy stuff. but then i decided to read it. and i'm glad i did Love it. and can't wait for more
signed don't judge a piece of art by it's length p.s. i loved this

 

XxxRainxxX said...
Dec. 19, 2009 at 1:18 pm:

Wow like even though this is only four lines it is really good and i know how you feel. Keep writing.

 

Ramna said...
Jul. 14, 2009 at 5:59 pm:

Very nice.
Keep writing.