Jumbled thoughts

June 3, 2012
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Minds to dust, breathlessly pale, bitter agony, sweet ordered chaos, vague awareness, dead to the world, unable to wake yet unable to sleep, hopelessly happy, wanting to be in the limelight, yet to shy to take center stage. Teach me how how to live and I'll teach you how to fly.

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Aashna. said...
Sept. 8, 2014 at 9:57 am
These words are somehow true when related to what usually human mind interprets the surroundings and how a person's confidence interferes with the dreams. And i loved it. But it could have been even better if you had gone deeper into your thoughts understanding the complexity of life.
MissEmilyDickinson This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Sept. 7, 2014 at 12:10 pm
This is absolutely amazing. It's full of emotion and you, also. I love the last line, "Teach me how to live and I'll teach you how to fly." That last line is inspiring and encouraging to me. I love it. I could connect to it, and I was there, if that makes sense. Your poem is vivid and powerful and all in all, full of amazingness. Thank you for sharing this. ^_^
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