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Even now as the day grows long
I think about the one I love
Every breath and every thought
Is concentrated on that day I pushed you away
It’s my mistake but I won’t turn the other way
Ill brake my back
If it means you’ll take me back
It doesn’t even matter how hard or how long
It can be an eternity
I have that long
Even as time continues to slip away
The picture of you is still in my brain
Your silky smooth hair
Eyes as beautiful as the night
Your skin smooth to the touch
Your face too amazing to match
It’s all there and never going anywhere
You’re the one I love
And that’s never going to change




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Acts1338This teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Apr. 18, 2012 at 1:41 pm:
that's absolutely beautiful but yet so sad
 
Vackoe replied...
Apr. 18, 2012 at 2:07 pm :
Thank you (: I have another one I posted about love but im waiting for them to approve it
 
Acts1338This teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. replied...
Apr. 19, 2012 at 3:23 pm :
good from what I've seen you're an amazing writer
 
Vackoe replied...
Apr. 21, 2012 at 2:50 am :
Well thank you (:
 
Vackoe replied...
Apr. 21, 2012 at 2:52 am :
Its called "My girl" you should go read it and tell me what you think about it (:
 
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