Screams

April 2, 2012
By Behind_a_Plastic_Smile GOLD, Roseville, California
Behind_a_Plastic_Smile GOLD, Roseville, California
17 articles 1 photo 129 comments

Favorite Quote:
"if you're not 1st you're last"


From behind the walls
All I ever hear
Are screams that scream
And fill me with fear

Day and night
Night and day
Screaming screams
Take my soul away

There’s hate in those screams
And doubt in those words
These scream-filled screams
I wish I’d heard

It’s to late
Once screams start they never stop
And I can’t even run
Because this is all I got



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on May. 17 2012 at 11:46 pm
Depressed-Ness SILVER, Yuma, Arizona
6 articles 0 photos 39 comments

Favorite Quote:
You can wish apon a star, but only you can make the dream come true.

You dont need boys, boys need you.

its really good.

on May. 7 2012 at 9:38 pm
Behind_a_Plastic_Smile GOLD, Roseville, California
17 articles 1 photo 129 comments

Favorite Quote:
"if you're not 1st you're last"

Ya I think you're right and now I also realized I left out a word in the line after that- "I wish I've never hear" is wat it should have said

on May. 7 2012 at 8:03 pm
snowleopard100 PLATINUM, New York City, New York
33 articles 1 photo 80 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Two roads diverged in a yellow wood, but I took the one less traveled by, and that has made all the difference."

So I was feeling the power of this poem both through the image and the the line break up but "scream filled screams" just seems a little forced to me. I mean there are so many interesting ways to describe the ways that a scream feels and/or what is it's like (personification?). But still, good job with this!!!!


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