March 30, 2012
By ShannonWhite123 BRONZE, Blakeslee, Pennsylvania
ShannonWhite123 BRONZE, Blakeslee, Pennsylvania
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Favorite Quote:
"What Goes Around Comes Back Around"

All she did was try to love,
tried to see beyond and above.
She gave him all she had to give.
He was the one she would always forgive.
Who could blame her he was all she ever wanted.
He was the one she thought she could trust in,
Yet he gave her nothing back.
He couldn't even see he was all she ever had.
She thought about taking her own life.
She thought that with out him nothing was going right.
Taking out her anger on the world
but no one could ever understand this brokenhearted girl.
He was who she didnt want to lose,
but taking him back made her look like a fool.
Wondering why he didn't want her anymore.
People asking her,"What are you crying for?"
She never knew what to say,
besides,"Someone will love this brokenhearted girl one day!"

The author's comments:
This poem is about a girl who is brokenhearted. she thought that the boy whom she loved was the right one for her and that he loved her back. but all he did was leave her with a broken heart & a million regrets.

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This article has 3 comments.

on Apr. 2 2012 at 9:20 pm

Yes Its Nice Isnt It ?


Heartless said...
on Apr. 2 2012 at 9:16 pm
I love your poem it shows true feelings and i understand what your trying to say it has a nice flow and rhyme pattern 

on Apr. 2 2012 at 5:33 pm
This is nice I like it you're a very good writer


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