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Loosing Someone You Love.

Wishing, hoping, and wanting you here.
Why did you go?
Why up there?
You were my best friend,
everything i had.
Now your gone,
makes me so sad.
You had such a great personality.
You made me laugh,
you made me smile,
people from every where, could see it for miles.
You were my love,
My little weenie,
please come back, don't leave me.
I know your looking down and saying "don't cry",
but how is it possible when your gone, and its no lie.
I miss my Antonio, and thats it.
Why couldnt god spare your life?
why couldn't he give you one more chance?
One more time?
Guess your happy now,
and maybe its best.
I just wish you didn't leave like all the rest.
Your in my memories,
Your in my mind,
and you'll always be mine.




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Ashleyy1213 said...
May 14, 2012 at 5:27 pm:
thank you :)
 
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DanielM said...
May 14, 2012 at 5:26 pm:
I liked it. It was really good. I can realte to this cause i've lost some people that i truly love so i totally realte to your poem. Great Job!!!
 
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Ashleyy1213 said...
Feb. 21, 2012 at 4:17 pm:
thanks everyone. i try though. im new at writing, and i have more feelings when im angry or upset. and usually my poems are sad and depressing, this ones about my friend so thank you very much.
 
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Writer_JordanThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Feb. 20, 2012 at 6:23 pm:
Cute? I thought it was rather moving, after reading it several times. For some reason the last few phrases struck a chord. Make sure when you are writing you are you put you're not your
 
Ashleyy1213 replied...
Feb. 21, 2012 at 4:19 pm :
alright thanks
 
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babyrex4 said...
Feb. 20, 2012 at 4:10 pm:
Very cute, but it could be better. A description and a simile or two would make it flow more nicely. I am truly sorry for your loss though :( stay strong!
 
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Swims.M.V. said...
Feb. 20, 2012 at 1:49 pm:
I could tell what you were going for but I think your words were talking not the feelings in your heart. nice job and sorry bout your friend.
 
Ashleyy1213 replied...
Feb. 23, 2012 at 4:43 pm :
alright thank you so much. please check out my others http://www.teenink.com/poetry/free_verse/article/434769/Being-Me/
 
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