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Lonely?

January 10, 2012
By The-fogotten-one BRONZE, Yelm, Washington
The-fogotten-one BRONZE, Yelm, Washington
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I felt lonely and alone like nobody cared
Once i made a Promise the sadness was cured
It took a long time, to figure things out
My plans are cyrstal clear, without a doubt

Now i know my prayers haven't gone unheard
Happiness flooding through me, i feel like a bird
The sun it seems is starting to shine
My only question is, when can i call you mine?

She fills my life with hope, takes over my dreams
This feels like a part, of lifes greater scheme
The doubts i once had are a thing of the past
These feelings are amazing, i want them to last

The patience I had, was worth it I admit
I found the piece that was missing, it's a perfect fit

The author's comments:
I wrote this poem after i started falling love with the girl of my dreams, it's almost an exact opposite of my last poem and it's all thanks to her

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on Mar. 9 2012 at 10:54 am
The-fogotten-one BRONZE, Yelm, Washington
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i wrote her another poem to ask her out the last line being "so look me in the eyes and smile so i can say" and then i asked her =) life is great and were doing amazing 1/13/12

on Jan. 13 2012 at 12:47 am
RayBaytheDinosaur GOLD, Hampton, South Carolina
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Awww its so cute =) it shows that you like her alot I bet shes really really lucky to have you