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Dreams,
As fragile,
As a new breath upon a cold winter night,
Freezing to the touch,
Yet significant against the white,
Opressing,
Supressing,
Depressing
Me into my square,
Afraid of the death that I will become,
And the life that I will suck out.



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Writer_Jordan said...
Feb. 22, 2012 at 6:52 pm:
I absolutely love your poetry skills, especially your use of descriptive words. Abundant, but they do not seem to be inserted randomly into your poems like many poets tend to do. Keep writing!!
 
DreamInTheRain replied...
Mar. 11, 2012 at 8:56 am :
Thank you so much! :3
 
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WillowtreeGirlThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Feb. 22, 2012 at 6:51 pm:
really love how you discribed and contrasted your view of a dream. I really agree with your poem and it brought back memories. I love it! Thanks for inspiring me. :)
 
DreamInTheRain replied...
Mar. 11, 2012 at 8:56 am :
No problem Im glad I did and thank you!
 
DreamInTheRain replied...
Mar. 11, 2012 at 8:56 am :
No problem Im glad I did and thank you!
 
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