Falling Foward

December 14, 2011
The heavy pressure swallowed my uncleared thoughts. From afar the images screamed excitment. Taking my breath away with it as it rushed near me. Thrusting my hands infront to simply brake my fall. I plunged into a pool of uncertainties. Where then the road gets rough. Not so sure I am what I was. Or even what I intended. I couldn't help but hear the reproch as the water whispered around me.

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Angelgirl39 said...
Jan. 1, 2012 at 4:00 am
*whistles* Wow, that is REALLY good.
WhiteWings said...
Dec. 21, 2011 at 5:16 pm
Wow,thats the nicest thing I could have said about  this poem.
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