Prostitute

December 11, 2011
By enc@geLoves BRONZE, Columbia, South Carolina
enc@geLoves BRONZE, Columbia, South Carolina
2 articles 0 photos 17 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Let not the world decieve thee with its beauty."


The whole world shook
But yet I stayed by your side
But you were so stubborn
That you turned to the world

Before you turned to me
So I shook the world
To get rid of all the
People who were untrue

To you
It's ironic, actually
Because when I did that
You were stuck with me

So you ran
You couldn't believe
That someone like me
Could love someone

Like you
It's true that you defiled
Yourself
But even a girl defiled

Is a girl loved
So be loved
By me

The author's comments:
I got my inspiration from when God confronted Isarel as being a prostitute, but even then he proclaim his love for them.

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jkilmer SILVER said...
on Dec. 25 2011 at 11:01 pm
jkilmer SILVER, Washington, District Of Columbia
6 articles 1 photo 8 comments

Favorite Quote:
When I am dead, I hope it may be said:
"His sins were scarlet, but his books were read."
"Declarations of love amuse me, especially when unrequited."
'Pity is a useless emotion.'
'Read. Breathe. Relax.'

I liked it. I don't know many stories from the bible, that one included, but I know of it and your poem was nicely written.

on Dec. 25 2011 at 12:10 pm
Angel_Writer GOLD, Chillicothe, Ohio
14 articles 0 photos 10 comments

Favorite Quote:
"God didn't take me from you, he only took my hand."

I like it. You are learning to create the flow in your words, as I am myself. Keep writing, and you will become better.

Znathan GOLD said...
on Dec. 23 2011 at 5:29 pm
Znathan GOLD, Lima, Other
10 articles 0 photos 2 comments

Favorite Quote:
Of course it is happening inside your head, Harry, but why on earth should that mean that it is not real?
-Dumbledore

This is amazing. I would suggest you change the last 3 lines a bit, they don't taste as well as the rest of the poem. But even if you keep it this way, it's a great poem. Congrats.

on Dec. 20 2011 at 8:42 pm
enc@geLoves BRONZE, Columbia, South Carolina
2 articles 0 photos 17 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Let not the world decieve thee with its beauty."

Thanks a lot!!!!

Loftus GOLD said...
on Dec. 20 2011 at 7:17 pm
Loftus GOLD, Ocoee, Florida
11 articles 1 photo 88 comments

Favorite Quote:
"You have brains in your head. You have feet in your shoes. You can steer yourself any direction you choose. You're on your own, and you know what you know. And you are the one who'll decide where you'll go." -Dr. Seuss

Really nice! Good meaning behind it as well. I don't know many stories from the bible, but this is one I knew so I was quite delighted with your poem! Great job!

on Dec. 20 2011 at 2:43 pm
enc@geLoves BRONZE, Columbia, South Carolina
2 articles 0 photos 17 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Let not the world decieve thee with its beauty."

Awww! Thanks.

on Dec. 20 2011 at 12:27 pm
readlovewrite SILVER, Greensboro, North Carolina
7 articles 1 photo 58 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Be quick to listen, and slow to speak, and even slower to judge."

This is amazing.  I read it twice through and I thought I understood it at first....But it is like reading Shakespeare - you read it once and it means one thing, and then you read it once more and it is like the poem has a whole new meaning.  This is really strong, and I really like how you broke up your lines and stanzas (especially the first three or four).  Keep writing, this is really good!

on Dec. 19 2011 at 9:23 pm
enc@geLoves BRONZE, Columbia, South Carolina
2 articles 0 photos 17 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Let not the world decieve thee with its beauty."

Thanks that really means a lot.

on Dec. 19 2011 at 8:44 pm
lilmartz PLATINUM, Perrysburg, Ohio
40 articles 5 photos 163 comments

Favorite Quote:
Live Life Like A Party That Never Ends

Wow. I can't believe I'm saying this but this has to be the best poem on this website I have ever read. For once, I can honestly say there is nothing that needs to be changed. The only part that maybe could use a little bit of work are the last 2 lines. They seem a little weak and generic, but maybe in time something better might come to you. I have no suggestions for it. I love the transitions between stanzas, and I love the metaphor! Really, really great job! This should be published in the magazine for sure!


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