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the place where I go desperately and anxiously
The place where I walk oddly and shoeless
Because my toes feel uncomfortable
when they feel the cold floor

The place where I violently and abruptly release my insanity, my craziness,my twisted unknown artistry

Where my hair raises up
because of the goosebumps
Because of my frosty,twisted and dark imagination

It's the place where I wake up at 2 am to write what the sleepy morning whispers me

This place is mine
This place is my precious
It's my well preserved iron trunk



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WhiteWings said...
Dec. 14, 2011 at 1:21 pm:

One word. Great

 

 
artmantist replied...
Dec. 14, 2011 at 1:44 pm :
tnk u very much
 
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Zeesquare said...
Dec. 12, 2011 at 11:08 am:
Good Work! verry impressive :)
 
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Wonderment said...
Dec. 12, 2011 at 11:07 am:
I love this! Its so descriptive and amazing. I can't even really form a real opinion other than I love it. :)
 
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youngspeare said...
Dec. 11, 2011 at 5:58 am:
Good job! The line "my twisted artistry" was simply epic. Keep posting :) 
Please check out my poem "Ghosts of the Past" and rate/comment? Would really appreciate it!
 
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Nathaniel said...
Dec. 8, 2011 at 9:14 pm:
Dark. Humorous. I like it. 
 
dbk1098This teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. replied...
Dec. 10, 2011 at 8:40 pm :
Really good!!!!!! Love the imagery and description!
 
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Resonating_Words said...
Dec. 5, 2011 at 8:55 pm:

Very nice (: As posted below, I like the sort of mystery to it. "My twisted unknown artistry" is probably my favorite line. 

However at "This place is my precious" I got a sudden vision of Gollum from Lord of the Rings XD So that sort of interupted my enjoyment of the poem temporarily. But only slightly -- intentional or not I enjoyed the reference XD

In all, well done. However, I did feel a slight lacking. It moves slowly at the beginning, entire stanzas given to descripti... (more »)

 
artmantist replied...
Dec. 5, 2011 at 9:00 pm :
tnx u very much, i ll work on the thing u told me. tnx again
 
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DifferentTeenThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Dec. 4, 2011 at 8:10 pm:
I love how mysterious this poem is, its kind of dark and secretive. I really liked it. The only thing you could work on in future poems is the flow and adding some poetic devices. Other than that though its awesome. Keep writing!
 
artmantist replied...
Dec. 4, 2011 at 8:35 pm :
tnx, means a lot to me, sure i ll take ur advice
 
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Lovestinks1395 said...
Dec. 4, 2011 at 3:28 pm:
This is pretty good, I look forward to seeing you grow as a writer in more of your work!
 
artmantist replied...
Dec. 4, 2011 at 8:35 pm :
tnx, means a lot to me
 
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