The Pain

November 25, 2011
By PRDGirl94 SILVER, NY, New York
PRDGirl94 SILVER, NY, New York
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tear are to pain world for a brocken heart to speack ( unknow writer)


pain full my ever being sending my world spinning. The hard fool under me feel cold as ice but I feel the warmth of my blood under me slowly leaving my soul. i close my eyes and the last thing i see was you. Your face was the last thing i saw before my world when dark..


The author's comments:
this poem came to me after i had a nightmare

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on May. 6 2012 at 3:06 pm
PRDGirl94 SILVER, NY, New York
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tear are to pain world for a brocken heart to speack ( unknow writer)

thanks that the point

on May. 6 2012 at 3:01 pm
kuraitenshei BRONZE, Nash, Texas
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Life is like the ocean, its full of crap.

I really loved it, it gives off the feeling of betrayal

on Jan. 9 2012 at 8:22 am
PRDGirl94 SILVER, NY, New York
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tear are to pain world for a brocken heart to speack ( unknow writer)

plz be free to write wat u think :)




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