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The Pain

pain full my ever being sending my world spinning. The hard fool under me feel cold as ice but I feel the warmth of my blood under me slowly leaving my soul. i close my eyes and the last thing i see was you. Your face was the last thing i saw before my world when dark..




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kuraitenshei said...
May 6, 2012 at 3:01 pm:
I really loved it, it gives off the feeling of betrayal
 
PRDGirl94 replied...
May 6, 2012 at 3:06 pm :
thanks that the point
 
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PRDGirl94 said...
Jan. 9, 2012 at 8:22 am:
plz be free to write wat u think :)
 
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