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In Your Eyes

April 23, 2008
By Anonymous

In your eyes I can always see the sun.
Nobody else can see;
I'm the only one.

You shine brighter than any star in the sky.
You have bright blue diamonds
I like to call your eyes.

You are the only reason
I choose to live.
You are the greatest gift
God could ever give.


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BabyGirl said...
on Oct. 30 2008 at 6:56 pm
I liked it because the guy i like has bright blue eyes and ythey are beautiful. Don't change anything about this poem.

sydney said...
on Oct. 30 2008 at 1:47 pm
this is so beautiful.. i really liked it

sean said...
on Oct. 25 2008 at 2:12 am
Very sweet, I like it alot. Might want to use different descriptions for the eyes though.Diamonds used to decricb eyes is a very basic approch. I liked it though.