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Their eyes tell silent stories.
Stories that would shock even the darkest of hearts.
These eyes have seen worse than some could even dream of.
They’ve seen killing and death, and pain and suffering to extents that can be hard to imagine.
Eyes that should be learning how to read are instead being taught how to fight.
Emotionless eyes are being forced to kill in gruesome ways.
Eyes that seem to have run out of tears, because crying never helped.
Their sobs are unheard, their tears are unseen.
Children who are innocent are being ruined by men who see no hope in their government.
Men who are willing to take advantage of an irreplaceable innocence.
The eyes are deep brown.
A brown so deep you could get lost in it.
Eyes that catch attention for their beauty.
They silently tell of innocence lost and of silent tears cried.
These are the eyes of a child soldier.

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shywriter said...
Nov. 19, 2009 at 5:41 am:
Amazing, keep writing!!
 
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ray1169 said...
Nov. 7, 2009 at 9:31 am:
I LOVE IT... dont ever stop writing.... you're to good to stop
 
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bamboom212 said...
Nov. 1, 2009 at 9:17 pm:
Wow, unbelievable. This poem really got to me. I personally have no talent in poetry, but this is amazing. Keep up the awesome work!! I wanna read more!! :P
 
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sobel95 said...
Oct. 28, 2009 at 11:19 pm:
"Eyes that seem to have run out of tears, because crying never helped." That part really spoke to me. Keep up the great work!
 
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geezlike said...
Oct. 28, 2009 at 10:45 pm:
Yes, it's a fantastic poem, but I don't think it was written to get personal compliments...child soldiers are true and their lives are destroyed along with those of their families. It is usually the youth of the world that stands up and demands that things change. How can we stand together to stop this kind of abuse of innocence and youth in our world?
 
mutekid016 replied...
Dec. 11, 2009 at 8:09 am :
Yea kids are the future, why are we fighting wars at our age? We should stop this.
 
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rosechick21 said...
Oct. 28, 2009 at 9:42 pm:
this is an amazing poem, it brought tears to my eyes.
 
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lauren_b said...
Oct. 28, 2009 at 7:00 pm:
outstanding poem, real truth seen through an artists eyes, just one way to express a disturbing matter, and a very good way at that.
 
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StephanieQueen said...
Oct. 28, 2009 at 4:14 pm:
A great poem, very true i agree with every word of it, this world is pathetic
 
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writer101 said...
Oct. 28, 2009 at 4:14 pm:
oh my goodness! That was beautiful!
 
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Uotani said...
Oct. 28, 2009 at 3:32 pm:
very awesome poem, its discriptive and moving and true . . . wow is one word that can describe it . . . amazing is another . . . . . . . ..
 
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roxamania96 said...
Oct. 28, 2009 at 2:48 pm:
this is beautiful and moving. i love how you keep describing their eyes. its phenomenal
 
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This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Oct. 28, 2009 at 10:11 am:
Such a sad, beautiful poem. I love that you wrote about this topic. It's a beautiful poem, keep writing.
 
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legolas_elf said...
Oct. 28, 2009 at 7:19 am:
I love this poem so much. It is really powerful and it captures the cruelty perfectly. If you guys could please read and comment on my poem. It is pretty recent and it's called I See. It's about the Jim Crow Laws. It's under the free write section so could you guys please post some comments on it?
 
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EmilyOlive This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Oct. 6, 2009 at 3:35 pm:
It's perfect. It's beautiful and perfect and I feel that if I say too much I just won't do it any justice at all. This is marvelous. Oops. Still not QUITE the right word!
 
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Stephaniere This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Oct. 6, 2009 at 1:01 am:
This is beautiful, I can only dream of writing something this powerful.
 
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sohardtoget said...
May 29, 2009 at 3:20 pm:
great poem
i disagree with everlastings words
very moving poem!

very well written
 
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cross-i'd-leopard said...
Apr. 20, 2009 at 3:32 am:
That was truly beautiful. The world needs fmore people with your train of thought. That was so true, it made me want to cry. I applaud you.
 
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locked up in bca said...
Apr. 15, 2009 at 7:32 pm:
i am locked up in bca your poem is pretty kool
 
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Willow This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Apr. 14, 2009 at 10:13 pm:
very powerful. so true.
 
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