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Upon the liles in the lake

Violets; she, a snowflake

Roses; she of lonely make

Raindrops fall into the lake

And comes a swan with silver eyes

She gazes past her empty vice

A song she sings, poetic lies

A redness in her silver eyes

White as the dawn on truth at night

A gown with tears of trees in sight

Falls hidden in the hearth; no light

The swan treads home into the night

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so_joyThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Sept. 27, 2012 at 8:16 pm:
Wow. This is magnificent. I was pulled into the melody of this poem and how magical it was. I absolutely are in love with this. I'm adding it to my favorites. You are very talented. Please read, rate, and comment on my poems! Thanks!
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UNserieswriter said...
Jan. 7, 2012 at 1:46 am:
Great poem! you dont over do it, and it rolls right off the tongue like a good poem should!
Wildflower30 replied...
Jan. 7, 2012 at 1:47 am :
Thank you! :) I'm glad you noticed.
SweetSandyFlower replied...
Apr. 17, 2012 at 12:23 am :
Short and sweet. I love it. Veryt well composed.
Wildflower30 replied...
May 21, 2012 at 12:16 pm :
Thank you! :)
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