Lost in You

October 17, 2011
By DarkIcarus1375 GOLD, Rockport, Texas
DarkIcarus1375 GOLD, Rockport, Texas
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Favorite Quote:
People live their lives bound by what they accept as correct or true. That is how they define reality. But what does it mean to be correct or true? Merely vague concepts....their reality may all be a mirage..... -Itachi Uchiha


You've been there for me through good times,
But you were also there through the bad,
You have always made me happy,
Anytime i was sad,
I don't know anyone else,
Who can take my worries away,
Who can make me smile,
Anytime of the day,
I don't know how to tell you this,
Any other way,
So this is what I'll tell you,
This is what I'll say,
I've long since found myself,
Lost in your eyes,
And for awhile,
I didn't understand why,
But I think I've figured it out,
I am head over heels in love with you,
And will forever be lost in you

The author's comments:
This piece is about a girl I am very close to. She is like my best friend and she has like i said been through everything with me.

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on Nov. 17 2014 at 10:05 pm
DarkIcarus1375 GOLD, Rockport, Texas
16 articles 0 photos 7 comments

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People live their lives bound by what they accept as correct or true. That is how they define reality. But what does it mean to be correct or true? Merely vague concepts....their reality may all be a mirage..... -Itachi Uchiha

Been writing more let me know what ya think

on Oct. 30 2011 at 8:19 pm
DarkIcarus1375 GOLD, Rockport, Texas
16 articles 0 photos 7 comments

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People live their lives bound by what they accept as correct or true. That is how they define reality. But what does it mean to be correct or true? Merely vague concepts....their reality may all be a mirage..... -Itachi Uchiha

thnx jenny

Jenny21 SILVER said...
on Oct. 25 2011 at 4:54 pm
Jenny21 SILVER, Pocatello, Idaho
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The people who mind don\'t matter, the people who matter don\'t mind.

Oh, Im sorry. But your writting is still amazing

on Oct. 24 2011 at 8:11 am
DarkIcarus1375 GOLD, Rockport, Texas
16 articles 0 photos 7 comments

Favorite Quote:
People live their lives bound by what they accept as correct or true. That is how they define reality. But what does it mean to be correct or true? Merely vague concepts....their reality may all be a mirage..... -Itachi Uchiha

oh well it is for the best

on Oct. 24 2011 at 8:10 am
DarkIcarus1375 GOLD, Rockport, Texas
16 articles 0 photos 7 comments

Favorite Quote:
People live their lives bound by what they accept as correct or true. That is how they define reality. But what does it mean to be correct or true? Merely vague concepts....their reality may all be a mirage..... -Itachi Uchiha

actually i have let her read it she told me she doesn't like me that way

Jenny21 SILVER said...
on Oct. 23 2011 at 10:07 pm
Jenny21 SILVER, Pocatello, Idaho
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The people who mind don\'t matter, the people who matter don\'t mind.

This is very well written, I love it and I can connect with it to, you really should let her read it. I hope you do.

on Oct. 22 2011 at 4:07 pm
CupcakeAddictAnonymous SILVER, Rockport, Texas
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"To the world you are one person, but to one person you may mean the world."

Tommy, shut up! This is amazing :P oh hiii :3

on Oct. 22 2011 at 3:23 pm
DarkIcarus1375 GOLD, Rockport, Texas
16 articles 0 photos 7 comments

Favorite Quote:
People live their lives bound by what they accept as correct or true. That is how they define reality. But what does it mean to be correct or true? Merely vague concepts....their reality may all be a mirage..... -Itachi Uchiha

thanks for the comments i really didn't think it was all that good but i guess it was after all

 


shy girl said...
on Oct. 20 2011 at 12:21 pm
that was really good i was touched by the feeling of yuor love for that girl i too have em for someone but i write about how he doesnt understand but im trying to publish my poems i have a whole note book full so i kinda need help.but that was wonderfull keep it up dnt give up.hoping u write more..

on Oct. 19 2011 at 6:08 pm
DAN_CER_554 SILVER, Myrtle, Missouri
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"I get out there and think, 'whatever happens, happens. If i fall, I fall. This is live theater and i am living in it.'"
-Ashley Bouder
New York City Ballet Principal Dancer

thats absolutely adorable. the this is about, i hope you let her read this. its really good. keep it up. i wanna read more!

on Oct. 19 2011 at 11:35 am
poetrylyrics BRONZE, Helena, Arkansas
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Favorite Quote:
1)I will be grateful in all circumstances.
2)The measure of a life, after all, is not its duration, but its donation

I love it . It was very meaningful.Keep up the good work.Check out my first poem. : )




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