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Lost in You

You've been there for me through good times,
But you were also there through the bad,
You have always made me happy,
Anytime i was sad,
I don't know anyone else,
Who can take my worries away,
Who can make me smile,
Anytime of the day,
I don't know how to tell you this,
Any other way,
So this is what I'll tell you,
This is what I'll say,
I've long since found myself,
Lost in your eyes,
And for awhile,
I didn't understand why,
But I think I've figured it out,
I am head over heels in love with you,
And will forever be lost in you

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Jenny said...
Oct. 23, 2011 at 10:07 pm:
This is very well written, I love it and I can connect with it to, you really should let her read it. I hope you do.
Tommy G. replied...
Oct. 24, 2011 at 8:10 am :
actually i have let her read it she told me she doesn't like me that way
Tommy G. replied...
Oct. 24, 2011 at 8:11 am :
oh well it is for the best
Jenny replied...
Oct. 25, 2011 at 4:54 pm :
Oh, Im sorry. But your writting is still amazing
Tommy G. replied...
Oct. 30, 2011 at 8:19 pm :
thnx jenny
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Tommy G. said...
Oct. 22, 2011 at 3:23 pm:

thanks for the comments i really didn't think it was all that good but i guess it was after all


JaydenAnn replied...
Oct. 22, 2011 at 4:07 pm :
Tommy, shut up! This is amazing :P oh hiii :3
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shy girl said...
Oct. 20, 2011 at 12:21 pm:
that was really good i was touched by the feeling of yuor love for that girl i too have em for someone but i write about how he doesnt understand but im trying to publish my poems i have a whole note book full so i kinda need help.but that was wonderfull keep it up dnt give up.hoping u write more..
DarkIcarus1375 replied...
today at 10:05 pm :
Been writing more let me know what ya think
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DAN_CER_554 said...
Oct. 19, 2011 at 6:08 pm:
thats absolutely adorable. the this is about, i hope you let her read this. its really good. keep it up. i wanna read more!
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poetrylyrics said...
Oct. 19, 2011 at 11:35 am:
I love it . It was very meaningful.Keep up the good work.Check out my first poem. : )
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