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October 7, 2011
By laylal BRONZE, Detroit, Michigan
laylal BRONZE, Detroit, Michigan
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Favorite Quote:
chances make champions

A woman was stripped of her pride.
Hurting in pain all on the insides.
Lifting his hand as it rise.
It comes down and then it strikes. The look upon her face her heart feels a rush.
I admit without shame she should have turned away.
Should have left him alone and went to a better place.
Now in fact… it was the way he would react.
To be a man such a strong attack.
Which causes a fear in the love of his life.

A woman he should
Cherish his beautiful wife. I might say I must say she shouldn’t be with someone who reacts this way.
But let us have sympathy and fear because she is no longer here.
But we are always astonished with the things that com should never think to raise your hand when being a man to your woman.
Still it is better but really its worse because the pain she felt caused a curse.
This is especially true for he usd abused and treatd as if an old pair of shoes.
I feel like she didn’t deserve no one deserves to be hurt don’t lift your hand at me don’t make me cry the last words she said to him before she died.

The author's comments:
what inspired this piece was living in a domestically violent house.

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