Blood of Tears

October 8, 2011
By Signed_DK SILVER, Declo, Idaho
Signed_DK SILVER, Declo, Idaho
5 articles 1 photo 35 comments

Favorite Quote:
There is no line between genius and insanity, I erased it.

Violence isn't the answer, it's the solution.


She ran,
The night, dark,
Closing in around her
Everything was wrong,
Nothing made sense
He loved her,
What had she done,
How could he
Treat
Her like she
Was nothing?
She slowed
Stairs coming into view
She sat
On the steps,
Head
In her hands
Crying, confused
As blood dripped
Onto
The pavement



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on Nov. 11 2011 at 3:52 pm
Danealle SILVER, Wheeling, Illinois
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Favorite Quote:
Anything is possible with a smile and goal in mind.

I got goosebumps! 

.Izzy. BRONZE said...
on Nov. 9 2011 at 3:52 pm
.Izzy. BRONZE, Broadview Heights, Ohio
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This poem is very emotional and I can relate to it too well. 5 stars. Good job!  

on Nov. 8 2011 at 5:34 pm
kingofwriters BRONZE, DeWitt, Michigan
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Favorite Quote:
"Books are a uniquely portable magic." - Stephen King

I love books, and I love technology, but I don't want to see the latter overwhelm the former. I just think books are meant to be pages you turn, not screens you scroll through.

I'm kind of wondering why you put only one word on some of the lines, but that's one of the only drawbacks to this poem. Even though you didn't use a lot of good descriptive words and writing techniques that could help improve your writing, I still liked it a lot!

 

Keep up the good work! :)


on Oct. 13 2011 at 10:02 am
MakennaD BRONZE, Rupert, Idaho
4 articles 0 photos 2 comments

Favorite Quote:
When a door closes a window opens. Now it's up to you decide if you want to squeeze through the window or find another door.

LOVE IT!!!!!!!! Even though I just told you that, i just can't stress that enough!!!!


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