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Blood of Tears

She ran,
The night, dark,
Closing in around her
Everything was wrong,
Nothing made sense
He loved her,
What had she done,
How could he
Treat
Her like she
Was nothing?
She slowed
Stairs coming into view
She sat
On the steps,
Head
In her hands
Crying, confused
As blood dripped
Onto
The pavement



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Danealle said...
Nov. 11, 2011 at 3:52 pm:
I got goosebumps! 
 
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.Izzy.This teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Nov. 9, 2011 at 3:52 pm:
This poem is very emotional and I can relate to it too well. 5 stars. Good job!  
 
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MakennaD said...
Oct. 13, 2011 at 10:02 am:
LOVE IT!!!!!!!! Even though I just told you that, i just can't stress that enough!!!!
 
kingofwritersThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. replied...
Nov. 8, 2011 at 5:34 pm :

I'm kind of wondering why you put only one word on some of the lines, but that's one of the only drawbacks to this poem. Even though you didn't use a lot of good descriptive words and writing techniques that could help improve your writing, I still liked it a lot!

 

Keep up the good work! :)

 
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