Please Stay.

July 28, 2011
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He said I like you, I said I did too,

We talked for hours even though there were things to do,

He said you’re amazing and so beautiful too,

I was so happy I didn’t know what to do,

He said I liked you so long, Im sorry I waited,

We know now I stated,

A couple days later he said,

Something I will forever dread,

I’m deciding to maybe move in with my dad,

This makes not just me but his mom sad,

Now you’re a million miles away,

And we both don’t know what to say,

I feel like you pushed me away,

Please tell me you’ll stay.

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NaleDawg said...
Aug. 7, 2011 at 4:11 pm
Awesome, loved it. It seemed filled with emotion, great job.
toriroxsoutloud replied...
Aug. 7, 2011 at 4:16 pm
Thanks very much (:
FreedomIsMyVirtue said...
Aug. 7, 2011 at 2:56 am
There are parts where you should have put quotation marks. On the fifth line, Im should be I'm. Other than that, I like this poem. Keep writing and then, everything will be perfect! :))
toriroxsoutloud replied...
Aug. 7, 2011 at 1:32 pm
thank you!
marissa87 said...
Aug. 3, 2011 at 8:11 am
i think this poems is really good!! u did a good job!
toriroxsoutloud replied...
Aug. 3, 2011 at 11:08 am
thank you ! (:
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