The girl that sits and waits

July 18, 2011
By pratly2 SILVER, Bath, New York
pratly2 SILVER, Bath, New York
7 articles 1 photo 0 comments

Favorite Quote:
nobody likes a spotlight when they're likely to fall on their face- isabella swan


There’s a girl that sits and waits

For someone there to

Change the fates

*

She looks around and upside down

But all she sees

Is this small town

*

No one sees her hidden pain

The kind that lasts

Throughout the rain

*

Her scars don’t show on either hand

She covers them

With a dark red band

*

She tries to hide what’s killing her,

The pain and scars

She can’t conquer

*

She’s wants so bad to see the light

But something’s got her

Dazed with fright

*

The hurt that lies within her soul

Has changed her heart

And left a hole

*

The days they end in misery

The nights just

Wake her angrily

*

She can’t break free

Can’t dare to be

Who she wants to be

*

Finally someone sees

And tells her friends

And family

*

She tried her best to fit in

And then one day

He walked in

*

Changed her life from there on out

And now there’s not

A single doubt

*

Fighting hard to stay alive

With him she knows

She can survive

*

In just a few more years time

She’ll grow up

And she’ll be fine

*

No longer does she sit and wait, the girl

Knows that

She’s his whole world.


Similar Articles

JOIN THE DISCUSSION

This article has 4 comments.


on Jul. 20 2011 at 6:00 pm
poetryLover_14 BRONZE, Buffalo, New York
1 article 0 photos 1 comment

Favorite Quote:
A LIFE LESSON TAKES A LIFE TIME TO LEARN BUT MISTAKES TAKSE LONGER TO LEARN FROM- MYKELLA AUSTIN

OMGRZ THT WAS SO AWSUM  ALL THE SIMILES AND METAPHORS IT WAS WOUNDERFUL I HOPE YHU NEVER STUP

 


on Jul. 19 2011 at 10:41 pm
Doylekinz BRONZE, North Canton, Ohio
3 articles 3 photos 17 comments

Favorite Quote:
Remember your Creator
in the days of your youth,
before the days of trouble come
and the years approach when you will say,
\"I find no pleasure in them\"- \"

Omg your writing is amazing! Beautiful and powerful :]

Keep on it!

Comment mine please? Thank you <3


on Jul. 19 2011 at 1:03 am
VictoriazDarkSecrets SILVER, Kansas City, Kansas
6 articles 0 photos 2 comments
aww i loved this sooo much. i had to tad as favorite :D . its great!!!....keep writing!!

on Jul. 18 2011 at 3:55 pm
Angie.Hudak GOLD, Doylestown, Pennsylvania
10 articles 0 photos 42 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Hope for the best, expect the worst."
"One good thing about music, when it hits you, you feel no pain." -Bob Marley

Oh my god, you're writing is so powerful! :) you have to keep writing poems like this, its soo amazingly beautiful!


SciArc

MacMillan Books

Aspiring Writer? Take Our Online Course!