cliche

July 10, 2011
By __horizon133 PLATINUM, Portage, Michigan
__horizon133 PLATINUM, Portage, Michigan
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Favorite Quote:
"laugh, and the world laughs with you. laugh hysterically, and for no apparent reason, and they will leave you alone." anonymous


Black riders surge on steel shod steeds
Black clouds merge over blood red seas
The Lords of Destruction drink mulberry mead
And there in their shadow the desolate breed

A newcomer stares in morbid wonder
Upon the broad back of white stallion Thunder
“What evil is this?” he cries out in a fit
Just the usual sh*t. Don’t bother.


The author's comments:
i was trying to give voice to the worn out plot structure most fantasy books are based off of. please rate and comment!

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on Jul. 15 2011 at 11:32 pm
__horizon133 PLATINUM, Portage, Michigan
26 articles 0 photos 232 comments

Favorite Quote:
"laugh, and the world laughs with you. laugh hysterically, and for no apparent reason, and they will leave you alone." anonymous

thank you! i certainly will!

TAR11 SILVER said...
on Jul. 15 2011 at 8:45 am
TAR11 SILVER, Allison Park, Pennsylvania
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I can totally see where you're coming from with this.  Please check out my poems if you get the chance. 


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