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Ocean Breeze

July 7, 2011
By Fitzz BRONZE, Oklahoma City, Oklahoma
Fitzz BRONZE, Oklahoma City, Oklahoma
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Favorite Quote:
"You know you're in love when you can't fall asleep because reality is finally better than your dreams." - Dr. Suess


So close your eyes
Lean in closer
I'll hold you tight
I won't let go

We're under a sunset
Straight out of a poster
It's falling down sweetly
Moving so slow

I kiss your nose
Tell you you're beautiful
The calm ocean waves
Say everything is fine

The breeze flies through our hair
The sun's final stage
A night starting with you
Is a night oh so divine

The author's comments:
I wrote this when I took a trip to Ft Lauderdale. I was thinking about a girl I love.

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Fitzz BRONZE said...
on Jul. 20 2011 at 4:18 pm
Fitzz BRONZE, Oklahoma City, Oklahoma
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Favorite Quote:
"You know you're in love when you can't fall asleep because reality is finally better than your dreams." - Dr. Suess

Sure thing! :D

on Jul. 11 2011 at 10:34 pm
NinjaGirl BRONZE, Valley City, North Dakota
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Favorite Quote:
The only thing holding us back in life is our desire to stay where we are and not venture further.
~Some random person on the Internet :P

That's a lot of romance packed into four short stanzas! Good job! Could you check out my work sometime?