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Broad and bold.

Calm, yet intimidating

Precious beast.

I must know more.

Passionate compassion.

Those soft eyes

Footsteps… like drums.
Beating drums.

A thunderstorm.

Captivating beauty
Natural wonders.

Large as a house
Light as a feather.

Pure souls and
Golden hearts.


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Determinded97 said...
Jun. 27, 2011 at 7:30 pm
I really liked the comparison ideas that you had. Great, simple yet meaningful poem.
Anagam said...
Jun. 27, 2011 at 3:11 pm
haha i've always thought elephants are soo cute! you wrote a great poem! :D especially for people who've never seen one live.
Little-Irish-Girl said...
Jun. 27, 2011 at 11:56 am
Elephants are my favorite animal and you described exactly why. Good Job. Go Elephants!!! and Writing!!!
cadetcaptainjones said...
Jun. 25, 2011 at 8:48 pm

As a soon-to-be Marine Reservist and Commanding Officer of a Marine Junior Reserve Officer Training Corps, I can say you hit the nail on the head!

I have a similar piece here:


P.S. to the fellow in the picture: Marines don't salute indoors ;)

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