I stare into the eyes of the future

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I stare into the eyes of the future but don't see beyond today
The blank expression on its face tells me I must stay
However being the way I am makes me wonder why
Why must I stay?
Why is this, the place?
Why is my future unclear?
I know now that the choices I have made led me here
And it is now I must face the truth
That there is no wide eyed future





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Tweedle Dee said...
Sept. 3, 2008 at 8:14 pm
we never know the future, just how we got to the present. i've been trying to express that in a poem forever, but i'll just give up now, because this was so great i just can't beat it. Great poem!!!
 
davidismyoneandonly said...
Sept. 3, 2008 at 12:21 pm
this is an amazing poem...great job
 
lovelara said...
Aug. 21, 2008 at 5:53 pm
i understand what you mean. like why is this where i must be? why cant i know my destiny? but then at the same time, it sounds really unfinished. like these are just your thoughts, not a real poem. you know?
 
Erulastiel said...
Aug. 21, 2008 at 2:31 am
I love the risk you took
I admire those who dare to let the reader get a glimpse through their eyes
 
imapoemperson said...
Aug. 16, 2008 at 3:13 pm
that is very dramatic, risky
i love it
you really take chances in your writing
 
HarlieJo said...
Aug. 11, 2008 at 7:18 pm
Wow. Thats Amazing.
I Write poems, i have 62 up to now. and im 14. But yours is amazing.
 
Quice said...
Aug. 10, 2008 at 8:57 pm
I think that this poem really tells alot because no one really knows what the future is really coming for and no one knows why life is the way it is. I think that this poem really speaks the truth...
 
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