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Dead Memories

April 5, 2011
By bree_bree GOLD, Auburn, Kentucky
bree_bree GOLD, Auburn, Kentucky
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Favorite Quote:
mistakes are made to be learned from.


Dead minds becoming aware,
glazed eyes beginning to stare,
it's the makings of a nightmare
and alone to much to bear.

Your thoughts are left to die alone,
your heart is meant to turn to stone,
deep inside you have always known
that your memories are death prone.

Tangled, dead memories stay,
ripping, dead memories play,
as time runs out look away
from your fading minds dismay.


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bree_bree GOLD said...
on Jun. 5 2013 at 5:24 pm
bree_bree GOLD, Auburn, Kentucky
12 articles 0 photos 39 comments

Favorite Quote:
mistakes are made to be learned from.

Thanks so much :) it was a spurr of the moment thought. Glad that it is amazing

Mckay ELITE said...
on May. 31 2013 at 1:35 pm
Mckay ELITE, Somewhere, Virginia
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Favorite Quote:
"The people who are crazy enough to think they can change the world are the ones who do."
—Apple’s “Think Different” commercial, 1997
“Crazy people are considered mad by the rest of the society only because their intelligence isn't understood.”
― Weihui Zhou

By the way, I'll give you 5 stars. 

Mckay ELITE said...
on May. 31 2013 at 1:34 pm
Mckay ELITE, Somewhere, Virginia
146 articles 0 photos 2260 comments

Favorite Quote:
"The people who are crazy enough to think they can change the world are the ones who do."
—Apple’s “Think Different” commercial, 1997
“Crazy people are considered mad by the rest of the society only because their intelligence isn't understood.”
― Weihui Zhou

Bree_bree, I absolutely love that first line: "Dead minds becoming aware, ". It instantly captured my attention. Which is vital in any poem. The rhythm and rhyme were spectacular. And I love the theme of dead memories. And the title too. 

bree_bree GOLD said...
on Jun. 17 2011 at 3:53 pm
bree_bree GOLD, Auburn, Kentucky
12 articles 0 photos 39 comments

Favorite Quote:
mistakes are made to be learned from.

thank you its grate to know that people can connect to my own thoughts on paper.. and i know what you mean when you say that and i get it XD and i promis ill keep wrighting

on Jun. 12 2011 at 10:10 pm
Pitiful_Anonymous PLATINUM, New Cumberland, West Virginia
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Favorite Quote:
"and all you f***ers go beep beep beep in cheap,plastic cars. If It's to dumb to see or say you'll still sing it, and I'll just cue the applause" - Marilyn Manson

This is really good and full of meaning for me (and hopefully you too, that's the point of writing, is it not?) I'm giving this 4 stars because I just wish it were longer... it's so good that i felt almost unsatisfied, but at the same time very satisfied.

 

KEEP IT UP!