She's feeling weak

April 20, 2011
By B.Harrison BRONZE, Peoria, Arizona
B.Harrison BRONZE, Peoria, Arizona
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You see the tear fall from her cheek
People look at her like she's a freak
Things are at their highest peak
She's feeling weak, she's feeling weak.

Don't wanna deal with this again
It's like back when i was just 10
Just close my eyes and let's pretend
Just tell me when, just tell me when.

Figuring out who's moving where
I don't want to show them i care
truth is, my heart can't even bare
this isn't fair, this isn't fair.

You're supposed to be here for me
Best friends? Where? because i don't see
How can you just let these things be?
Miss you like crazy, miss you like crazy.

Now it's time to put on a smile,
because you won't see me for awhile.

The author's comments:
I decided to write this when my parents started to split up, & when i was losing my best friend.

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Anagam BRONZE said...
on May. 19 2011 at 11:05 pm
Anagam BRONZE, Tulsa, Oklahoma
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dis reminds me of wen i mov n mov n mov again. leavin friends n some friends arent even there. n life moves on but i just feel weak w/o da familiar.

good job!! luv da repetition of phrases. :)

on May. 19 2011 at 9:19 pm
WinterFairy PLATINUM, Chicago, Illinois
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Favorite Quote:
"Don't dream it. Be it."
"Singing is praying twice, and dancing is singing with the body."
"Paper is more patient than man."
"Where you live shouldn't determine whether you live"

I really connect 2 this. My dad moved out last year & my best friend started changing on me. Well written though! Luv it! :)


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