If I die..

April 7, 2011
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If I die before tomorrows sun, would I have been happy with what I've done? Would I have hurt or helped someone? Would there be guilt in my life? Would I have children? Would I have been a wife? Would I have I been wealthy? Would I have been poor? Would I have done what I want or would I want to do more? Would I relax and let God take me home or will I worry that I'm leaving my family alone? Would I have taken something I shouldn't or given something I thought I wouldn't? Would I have been the person I wanted to be or just the person I wanted everyone to see? Would I have been strong or weak? Would I have spoke the things I think? Would I have stood up for what I love and who I am or would I have backed down? Will I be satisfied when they lower me into the ground?

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WinterFairy said...
May 5, 2011 at 8:21 pm
Wow. This is really beautiful. Really heart-felt. Three very special people in my life just passed away over the course of the last few months, and I think about this stuff too. Gorgeous.
vampier said...
May 5, 2011 at 7:41 am
this is so sad, i thank so :( i thank that it was your time to wright poem's. and i have a small qweston 4 you is this poem about (GOD) i just wont to know???!!!
music04 said...
May 4, 2011 at 10:40 pm
Thank you :)
AnnaKarenina This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
May 4, 2011 at 10:05 pm
Wow. This fulfills the purpose of poetry-to expose conflicts within us over things we cannot fathom or control.
purplechoc replied...
May 5, 2011 at 8:02 pm

i'd have to agree with annakarenina that this fufils the exepctations of poetry.

also it does highlight some possibly delicate feelings and emotions in an understated way.

i like this. and if you could would you tell me why you wrote it?????

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