If I die..

April 7, 2011
By Hkay04 BRONZE, Choctaw, Oklahoma
Hkay04 BRONZE, Choctaw, Oklahoma
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Favorite Quote:
I have many!


If I die before tomorrows sun, would I have been happy with what I've done? Would I have hurt or helped someone? Would there be guilt in my life? Would I have children? Would I have been a wife? Would I have I been wealthy? Would I have been poor? Would I have done what I want or would I want to do more? Would I relax and let God take me home or will I worry that I'm leaving my family alone? Would I have taken something I shouldn't or given something I thought I wouldn't? Would I have been the person I wanted to be or just the person I wanted everyone to see? Would I have been strong or weak? Would I have spoke the things I think? Would I have stood up for what I love and who I am or would I have backed down? Will I be satisfied when they lower me into the ground?


The author's comments:
Things I think about before I die.

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on May. 5 2011 at 8:21 pm
WinterFairy PLATINUM, Chicago, Illinois
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Favorite Quote:
"Don't dream it. Be it."
"Singing is praying twice, and dancing is singing with the body."
"Paper is more patient than man."
"Where you live shouldn't determine whether you live"

Wow. This is really beautiful. Really heart-felt. Three very special people in my life just passed away over the course of the last few months, and I think about this stuff too. Gorgeous.

on May. 5 2011 at 8:02 pm
secrets_of_silence GOLD, Gisborne, Other
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Favorite Quote:
life had i loved the more
had it but passed away
as quietly as the day
ebbs from the darkening star.


-emanuel litvinoff

i'd have to agree with annakarenina that this fufils the exepctations of poetry.

also it does highlight some possibly delicate feelings and emotions in an understated way.

i like this. and if you could would you tell me why you wrote it?????


vampier BRONZE said...
on May. 5 2011 at 7:41 am
vampier BRONZE, Glasgow, Kentucky
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Favorite Quote:
"my favorite thang about eating gumybares is knowing that thay wont fight you back when you bite there heads off.......!!!!!"

this is so sad, i thank so :( i thank that it was your time to wright poem's. and i have a small qweston 4 you is this poem about (GOD) i just wont to know???!!!

music04 said...
on May. 4 2011 at 10:40 pm
Thank you :)

on May. 4 2011 at 10:05 pm
RebeccaNicole GOLD, Port Washington, New York
16 articles 0 photos 4 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Chocolate or vanilla?" most everyone at some point

Wow. This fulfills the purpose of poetry-to expose conflicts within us over things we cannot fathom or control.




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