Things She Hates

March 31, 2011
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The things she hates are,
Her cell phone, that degrades her with its cruel messages.
Clothes, that expose all her extra weight.
Friends, that soon became her enemies.
And gossip, about her sexuality.

And even though,
Her dad, left when she was two.
And her mom, drinks far to much.
There is one thing she loves,
it is nothing more,
than the sweet relief,
of her knife,
pressing at her skin.





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AnonymousOne said...
Jun. 5, 2011 at 10:44 pm
I really liked this. Especially the comma placements in the second stanza (english guru crap, i know) but, i also really liked the whole poem. It wasn't at all what i had expected it to be.
 
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