Things She Hates

March 31, 2011
By Hulien BRONZE, New Hyde Park, New York
Hulien BRONZE, New Hyde Park, New York
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The things she hates are,
Her cell phone, that degrades her with its cruel messages.
Clothes, that expose all her extra weight.
Friends, that soon became her enemies.
And gossip, about her sexuality.

And even though,
Her dad, left when she was two.
And her mom, drinks far to much.
There is one thing she loves,
it is nothing more,
than the sweet relief,
of her knife,
pressing at her skin.


The author's comments:
I really hate when people ask me "who is this about" and I say no one really because that's the truth. I really wanted to be more of the general people who do this.

My idea was to take things that girls like and make this girl hate them.

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RRRRR BRONZE said...
on Jun. 5 2011 at 10:44 pm
RRRRR BRONZE, Orrville, Ohio
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Favorite Quote:
"Education is when you read the fine print. Experience is when you don't."- Pete Seeger

"I didn't quit because I wasn't strong enough to live through it, i stopped because i was strong enough to move on." -Unknown

I really liked this. Especially the comma placements in the second stanza (english guru crap, i know) but, i also really liked the whole poem. It wasn't at all what i had expected it to be.


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