His Name Was George Olsen Dalore MAG

March 24, 2011
By James Yu BRONZE, Wyckoff, New Jersey
James Yu BRONZE, Wyckoff, New Jersey
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On a Sunday his body washed ashore,
A crown and jewels his body bore.
He was nine feet tall,
As solid as a wall,
And the people named him George Olsen Dalore.

He was already as dead as could be,
But his magnificence they could still see.
They made up legends of his voyage,
And each was filled with his courage.
Finally they set his body free to the sea.

However, his beautiful face they would never forget.
It was as if he had caught them in a net.
They seemed enlightened,
Convinced that their lives were brightened,
But they felt that they owed George a huge debt.

They would shower him with gorgeous gifts,
Claiming that nothing would ever be fit,
For his majesty.
And they would all agree,
That they would never forget this.

These people started to live only for him,
And claimed he was like a phantom limb.
How he was gone for good,
But he still stood,
In their hearts and minds as a whim.

They didn’t even know his true name,
Or even if he had a claim to fame.
But he was king of their land,
Owning every grain of sand,
And soon their God he became.

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on Nov. 4 2013 at 12:32 pm
k8husted PLATINUM, Central Point, Oregon
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I love this! Inspired! Keep writing 

james22 said...
on Apr. 15 2011 at 10:53 am
Yes, i actually was. Nice catch

on Apr. 14 2011 at 10:24 am
Karaliin BRONZE, Walnut, California
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Hi! I'm wondering whether or not you were inspired by that story "The Handsomest Drowned Man in the World"? I see some correlation. :) 

on Mar. 26 2011 at 3:20 pm
jennee21_ann GOLD, Helper, Utah
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Favorite Quote:
"Don't gain the world and lose your soul....wisdom is better than silver or gold."

"You can always close a book, but you can never close the mind of a writer."

wow! this is great :) such a mysterious poem and its so creative! the rhyming was great, it made it so smooth to read :) this is an awesome piece! would you mind checking out my piece "when the snow stops falling"? thanks! keep writing :) 5 stars :))


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