I Am Walking MAG

March 24, 2011
By Corrinne DuRoss BRONZE, Wilmington, Delaware
Corrinne DuRoss BRONZE, Wilmington, Delaware
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I am walking with no destination,
On a path painted with moonlight,
With strokes of green and splotches of white.

I am walking outside of my body,
With a soul free of its owner,
On a path that never ends,

I am walking with a ghost,
On a journey with a stranger,
On a path painted with moonlight.

I am walking with my eyes shut,
A path in any direction I go,
I have no destination.

I am walking,

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Mzungu said...
on Apr. 7 2011 at 10:27 pm
Mzungu, Wilmington, Delaware
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Thank you, haha. I'm the writer of this and I'm glad that you enjoyed it. I'll definitely check out some of your work.

on Mar. 27 2011 at 9:29 pm
midnitewanderer GOLD, West Des Moines, Iowa
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Favorite Quote:
Don't let what you can't do stop you from doing what you can do.
John Wooden
The future belongs to those who believe in the beauty of their dreams.
Eleanor Roosevelt

This is breathtaking. I love your phrases (Exp. on a path painted w/moonlight) also like the use of the word splotches. It's quite evident you choice each word and phrase with care. Great Job!

If you have time check out my work! Thanks, Claire=) 

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