Saddness flows through me

January 5, 2008
By richelle jones, Fayetteville, NC

Saddness flows through me
Like a raging waterfall
Pounding against my heart
Drowning out the beat

The waterfall flows through me
Holding my breath
Confusing my thoughts
Stealing my life

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on Aug. 12 2010 at 3:49 am
BrokenForTheMoment BRONZE, Thornton, Colorado
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Favorite Quote:
"When people see things, they should see them with compassion."

I loved you're poem. It's described what I feel so stongly and could write forever on, in a few simple touching lines.


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