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Our Sunset

I love to watch the sunset
Counting every stunning hue
But I sometimes start to wonder
Why I’m not watching it with you

I love to see the sunsets
At the end of every day
You aren’t here beside me
But I’ll watch it anyway

The sun’s beneath the horizon
Yet still the colors shine
This sunset’s ours forever
This sunset’s yours and mine





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Geckogirl said...
Feb. 13, 2011 at 8:19 pm

HI! I REALLY LIKE THIS POEM! IT IS QUITE DESCRIPTIVE AND EXPRESSIVE, THOUGH NOT TOO LONG. GOOD JOB!

(P.S. IS THE ALL CAPS NORMAL? 'CAUSE IT WON'T LET ME WRITE IN LOWERCASE...)

 
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