Cutting

December 14, 2007
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My skin separates leaving a sea of


blood, flowing down my left arm.

I smile 'cause i know I'm alive.

I have got yet through another day

of this. . .

My mind wanders to a blank,

leaving my eyes to draw back.

My breath shortens to a gasp.

I'm ready for my second cut.

Tears roll down my cheeks.

I feel relieved once again,

marking yesterday's spot. . .





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chloe_garrett said...
Jan. 31, 2012 at 8:49 am
5/5 I can relate. Your are great at writing. Can you check out some of my poems, comment and rate?
 
ilokakjid3 said...
Dec. 9, 2011 at 9:35 am
This reminds me of myself. I stopped about a year ago, but I still think about doing it..
 
Sanjana K. said...
Nov. 17, 2011 at 9:35 pm
I can totally relate to you! It's refreshing, exhilirating , but addicting! You should try to stop, I'm trying to, it's hard but it will be worth it later on!
 
justsmileanddance said...
Oct. 30, 2011 at 12:57 pm
i can totally relate. i just wish i could put it into words like you do
 
savyi said...
Sept. 25, 2011 at 2:17 pm
i really like this i really can relate you should read some of mine and comment what u think <3
 
xximjustmexx said...
Jul. 7, 2011 at 3:18 pm
5/5 I can totally relate. I feel the same way. Can you please vote and comment on my peoms?
 
lovetildeath said...
Jul. 4, 2011 at 3:58 am
This is really good.I cut myself too just to keep me alive.Its good to know there are more people who do it.Just stop eventually because you don't want permanent scars.
 
mel_aka_mic said...
Jun. 25, 2011 at 1:34 pm
I love this. I really do. It helps me realize I'm not the only one that feels this way.
 
LazzE said...
Jun. 22, 2011 at 10:32 pm
I loved the poem! Exactly how I feel when I use to cut! Well written. Keep on writting, but stop the cutting. It feels better when you stop, then when you really do.
 
Coop123 said...
May 31, 2011 at 9:49 am
Thats soooo deep. But i really love it.
 
HayleySantana said...
May 24, 2011 at 1:39 am
Beautiful. exactly how i feel.
 
kewdee said...
May 2, 2011 at 11:00 am
I totally understand your poem! It's so true! I cut too, just to know that I'm alive, it's a kind of comfort.
 
hopelessromantic17 said...
Feb. 20, 2011 at 10:05 pm
This is so meaningful.  The line "I smile 'cause I know I'm alive" definitely struck a nerve.  It's very true. Keep writing!
 
Coop123 replied...
May 31, 2011 at 9:50 am
I love the part where " I know im alive."
 
xKortnix said...
Dec. 23, 2010 at 12:01 pm
I love this. I don't cut to die, I cut to make sure I'm still alive.
 
xRainxKissedx replied...
Jan. 28, 2011 at 3:19 pm
Same story here. 
 
hope95 replied...
Jun. 27, 2011 at 10:40 pm
Same with me
 
wind.and.rain.again said...
Nov. 3, 2010 at 6:20 pm
meaningful poem. its really in the present, going detail by detail.
 
xXnew_revolutionXx said...
Oct. 30, 2010 at 8:51 am
i really liked this. that's one of the reasons i do it, too- to feel alive. great job, and keep it up!
 
billlover420 said...
Oct. 18, 2010 at 11:56 am
i like this poem alot it is really good it seems real like you know someone who dose this or something like that it is really good and i love it
 
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