Inside Out Me

January 7, 2011
By Emma.ryan SILVER, Andover, Massachusetts
Emma.ryan SILVER, Andover, Massachusetts
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No one steps inside
And truly gets to know me
No one ever visits
So I’m usually left alone
Everyone always questions
But they never get an answer
I’m not who I used to be or who I hope to be
I just want to be me.



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on Jan. 26 2011 at 2:14 pm
Emma.ryan SILVER, Andover, Massachusetts
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Thanks for the feedback. I agree now looking back on it, i could have done more personal encounters, so thank you so much for the feedback :)

on Jan. 26 2011 at 2:12 pm
Emma.ryan SILVER, Andover, Massachusetts
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Thank you soo much!! :)

on Jan. 18 2011 at 4:51 pm
Anabelle BRONZE, Orion, Illinois
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Favorite Quote:
\"There is always some madness in love. But there is also always some reason in madness.\"
Friedrich Nietzsche

i really like this =]

bigdreamer14 said...
on Jan. 18 2011 at 12:14 pm
bigdreamer14, Y Ya Need To Know???, Louisiana
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Favorite Quote:
You can say that I'm a talented writer, but all I can do is write down my feelings on paper and form them into sentences with my own personal flavor.

So true for a lot of people, including me. I think more creativity can be based instead of bulleted and brief factors. I think this poem should be a bit more elaborate, but I really like this a lot.


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