Chaos

November 29, 2010
By ZeldaEve GOLD, Lansing, Michigan
ZeldaEve GOLD, Lansing, Michigan
14 articles 0 photos 9 comments

Murder Murder Murder
That Is All I see
Violence Violence Violence
Is That All There Can Be
Chaos Chaos Chaos
Why What Else Should Exist
Disaster Disaster Disaster
Is Covered By The Mist
Depression Depression Depression
That Is All The People Feel
Hunger Hunger Hunger
Can"t Anyone Get A Meal
Death Death Death
How Many More Must Die
Grief Grief Grief
Is Everyone Going To Cry
Mister Mister
I Know You Want To Change It
But The People Will Throw A Fit
This Is What They Grew Up With
And This Is The Way They Want To Live

The author's comments:
I wrote this because I was angry with the way people are acting about all the bad things in the world. I hope people will get something out of this.

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sakina GOLD said...
on Jul. 18 2011 at 1:00 pm
sakina GOLD, Chennai, Other
18 articles 13 photos 173 comments

Favorite Quote:
A negative thinker See's a difficulty in every opportunity but a positive thinker sees an opportunity in every difficulty. So always think positive and u'll surely B successful in LIFE.
-Hazrat Ali (A.S)

OMG..Were you aiming to stab ppl by ur poem..?lol

iHannahJ GOLD said...
on Jul. 18 2011 at 12:00 pm
iHannahJ GOLD, Oshkosh, Wisconsin
17 articles 0 photos 12 comments

Favorite Quote:
"I veiw myself on my intentions, the world veiws me on my actions."

wow. I really like this!!! The only thing I have to suggest is you may want to make Mister Mister a new stanza.

ZeldaEve GOLD said...
on Jul. 18 2011 at 10:31 am
ZeldaEve GOLD, Lansing, Michigan
14 articles 0 photos 9 comments
Thank you. I was aiming for that.

sakina GOLD said...
on Jul. 18 2011 at 10:30 am
sakina GOLD, Chennai, Other
18 articles 13 photos 173 comments

Favorite Quote:
A negative thinker See's a difficulty in every opportunity but a positive thinker sees an opportunity in every difficulty. So always think positive and u'll surely B successful in LIFE.
-Hazrat Ali (A.S)

I felt it was coming right towards me..Sorry typo...

sakina GOLD said...
on Jul. 18 2011 at 10:29 am
sakina GOLD, Chennai, Other
18 articles 13 photos 173 comments

Favorite Quote:
A negative thinker See's a difficulty in every opportunity but a positive thinker sees an opportunity in every difficulty. So always think positive and u'll surely B successful in LIFE.
-Hazrat Ali (A.S)

When I was reading ur poem,I felt like it's coming right toward's it...And is gonna stab me fight now..As I was reading,I was able to imagine wat ur trying to say...It has a good flow...:)


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