November 29, 2010
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baller4eva This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Jul. 18, 2011 at 12:00 pm
wow. I really like this!!! The only thing I have to suggest is you may want to make Mister Mister a new stanza.
sakina said...
Jul. 18, 2011 at 10:29 am
When I was reading ur poem,I felt like it's coming right toward's it...And is gonna stab me fight now..As I was reading,I was able to imagine wat ur trying to say...It has a good flow...:)
sakina replied...
Jul. 18, 2011 at 10:30 am
I felt it was coming right towards me..Sorry typo...
llove_vampirell replied...
Jul. 18, 2011 at 10:31 am
Thank you. I was aiming for that.
sakina replied...
Jul. 18, 2011 at 1:00 pm
OMG..Were you aiming to stab ppl by ur poem..?lol
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