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If I could only, make a deal with god,
To trade places with him, for only one day,
What would I do, what would he say,
About the life he gave me, about the world today?
Would I be as blind, would I turn away?
What would I do, what would I say?
Would he start anew, would he make it ok?
What would he do, what would he say?
Could he turn away, from all who suffers,
If he had to face them this very day?
"What could he do?" is what I would say.
Did he let us suffer, or did we lose our way,
From how we started out, from that beginning day?
But is it our fault that we wanted to stay?
Whose to blame for the world today?
But oh, how could he let us live this way?
If i could only make a deal with God,
To trade places with him for only one day,
What could I do, what could I say
to make our lives...ok......





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JJSchneider said...
Dec. 15, 2010 at 2:44 am

Very nice wording great flow with a strong ending

 

 
LilxRed replied...
Dec. 16, 2010 at 3:26 pm
why thank you :)
 
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