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what if the rain never fell
if life was lifeless
we'd be living in hell
what if god never gave us a heart
if we didnt love
we'd be falling apart
What if none of us had any power
if we were weak
we'd be a colorless flower
What if we had no voice
if we were quiet
we'd had no choice




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mgb405 said...
Dec. 10, 2010 at 11:47 am:
I like the rhyme in this poem. "what if god never gave us a heart/if we didn't love/ we'd be falling apart" (l.1/2/3) are my favorite lines. I would change the tone of this poem because not all "what ifs" are bad. 
 
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