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Surrounded by
flower fields
and fireflies
holding hands
and soft whispers
on that
little dirt road




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Thesilentraven This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Oct. 2, 2010 at 7:45 pm:
This is quite a wonderful poem. Those simple, seven lines were all that were needed to create a beautiful picture. You succeeded in creating something beautiful, so I applaud you.
 
NothingButAli This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. replied...
Oct. 14, 2010 at 1:10 pm :
thank you very much (:
 
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