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Emotional Venom

September 13, 2010
By JuanMCR BRONZE, Plano, Texas
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JuanMCR BRONZE, Plano, Texas
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There's no room in this hell There's no room in the next . But does anyone notice there's a corpse in this bed.

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Black ooze forming all around my skin/It will change my whole outside no matter what good I have in/ Pushed you away god knows its not what you deserve/ I cant let you down I have to control this blood hungry nerve/ I will fix my self to make sure I can hold you close and tight/ give me a chance this time I promise I wont bite/

So let me change my ways before you walk away
ill cure myself and try to be normal some way

The author's comments:
I have really bad anger problems and it really just takes over me and it hurts the girl that I love I wrote this to show her that I know its a problem and I know what can happen if its not fixed but I will fix it.
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