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I'm holding destiny in my hands-
Joy or sorrow? I've got power
When rapture calls my soul to dance
To weather lifetimes in an hour.
In my arms I cradle a universe
Of sweetest passion spun at midnight-
Deep as the sky, yet shallow as a star,
It dissipates at dawning sunlight.





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proser said...
Oct. 28, 2013 at 1:35 pm
Stunning! You rhymed and managed to use delicious wordchoice all at once!
 
TwinDemons said...
Apr. 2, 2011 at 6:28 pm
Ok, this is my favoirte one. I love it! I love the night and this just seems like the perfect poem to fit it. Keep it up!!!!!
 
leafyThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Apr. 2, 2011 at 6:04 pm
i like this poem a lot, and usually i don't even like poems in this style! keep up the good work!
 
RainStorm said...
Apr. 2, 2011 at 1:01 pm
Amazing, how much this describes me... Whenever I read it, I think of staying up late to ponder the turn of the universe. Looove it!
 
HaleyDRog. said...
Apr. 1, 2011 at 9:37 pm
I love your style! You must be a very observant person and thats what makes your work stand out to me! This was an amazing piece of work! Keep it up!
 
TanGem This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. replied...
Apr. 1, 2011 at 10:02 pm
You are too kind. Thank you!
 
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